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I understand you had this great idea when you correlated the "jerry" in your decent animation with the "jerry" in seinfeld. However too much work was unaccomplished when you made this barely a chuckle idea into a short. I'm just saying this idea should have stayed in your head as a personal laugh instead of denoting time to this stumbled upon idea which was just a waste of your time. Seriously, make original funny stuff that doesn't involve someone who should be dead to everybody. In 50 years will people still refer to seinfeld as the guy who said whats the deal too often or can his schtick die right now without you reminding me of him and his big nose. Which by the way your character jerry doesn't have, and also doesn't have a long face with brown hair. If you felt so much like making the animation since it fits in with the noose at the end, why didn't you just animate a depiction of seinfeld? Were you too lazy to do so I ask? But you weren't too lazy to spend hours animating these new jerry seinfeld ish speeches, barely going beyond the "whats the deal with ____" line. I must admit though at times the voice acting for jerry was almost spot on, WHY DID YOU WASTE TIME WITH THAT. Now what are you going to do. What if Jerry Seinfeld watches and decides the only joke that could redeem his career would be to kill himsel with the last thing his mother seeing is this animation left open on his computer. Basically I'm accusing you of potentially hurting Jerry Seinfelds feelings, which are very volatile. In fact, this is Jerry Seinfeld and I'm going to sue you because I have copyrighted the term Whats the deal with.... blank. Expect Newman at your door, I'll sik him on you. Alright I'm done.

hey

I like the idea of making a plot behind the whole thing but the voice over was pretty bad. Since you can't go making the characters themselves speak I can understand why it had to be done but using a womans voice like in the beginning of lord of the rings was a poor choice in my opinion. You could have used less voiceover, and more consistency to the amount of detail that went into the first brackenwood shorts. Something about his running time lapse was off and the cartooony childhood bits were coloured oddly. I think others would agree that the wild spontaneity of the first animations with more character depth in the actions of bitey was a large component which drew popularity to the theme of the whole thang. Now its less wild and linear (what with an obvious plot on the way) and I really don't think this wizard being is going to conform to the original intent with this series. Im sure ill still enjoy the future brackenwoods, and maybe this was a more concrete attempt at proving your ability in other regards, but with the distraction of plot thickening I can't really see this series being anywhere as good as your first contributions. Of course it probably will mean more for you in the future. haha

meh feh,

depending on your age this is either a good flash or pretty bad since the twist was really obvious. kudos to all the hard work though, but next time you should animate to a better plot. not that theres anything I can think of right now, but if I came up with that lame joke I definitely wouldn't waste my time animating it. still... looked nice.

very nice

gave me a couple shivers.... but seriously, you can not hold a match straight up and expect it to keep burning. seriously, come on.

then boom

there was another cat face, why not have him sing the alphabet backwards that would have me entertained.

oy kitty

eat your greens dont forget the beans.
eat your shoes dont forget the socks and the strings even eat the box you bought them in you can eat the truck that brought them in. MMMMMMMM

A great story.

Beautiful. But what came first? The music or the animation?

Nice

My take is childhood inviduality taken away by adulthood or sumtin. COOL!

Fine, whatever

This was good for what it was meant as... I mean the ideas are decent, but I don't really see any humor here. Woah a frikkin lazer i mean woah.

right...

Because polar bears have opposable thumbs, weak teeth and a shark survived the canning process. Asides from the plot though, the animation was very well done.