Score: 10

"hey"

submission: the Last of the Dashkin

date: December 9, 2009

I like the idea of making a plot behind the whole thing but the voice over was pretty bad. Since you can't go making the characters themselves speak I can understand why it had to be done but using a womans voice like in the beginning of lord of the rings was a poor choice in my opinion. You could have used less voiceover, and more consistency to the amount of detail that went into the first brackenwood shorts. Something about his running time lapse was off and the cartooony childhood bits were coloured oddly. I think others would agree that the wild spontaneity of the first animations with more character depth in the actions of bitey was a large component which drew popularity to the theme of the whole thang. Now its less wild and linear (what with an obvious plot on the way) and I really don't think this wizard being is going to conform to the original intent with this series. Im sure ill still enjoy the future brackenwoods, and maybe this was a more concrete attempt at proving your ability in other regards, but with the distraction of plot thickening I can't really see this series being anywhere as good as your first contributions. Of course it probably will mean more for you in the future. haha

Score: 7

"meh feh,"

submission: Fandito Halloween 2009

date: October 29, 2009

depending on your age this is either a good flash or pretty bad since the twist was really obvious. kudos to all the hard work though, but next time you should animate to a better plot. not that theres anything I can think of right now, but if I came up with that lame joke I definitely wouldn't waste my time animating it. still... looked nice.

Score: 9

"very nice"

submission: A Pwanchi Halloween 2

date: October 26, 2009

gave me a couple shivers.... but seriously, you can not hold a match straight up and expect it to keep burning. seriously, come on.